Random Workshop: Punchline critique

From time to time, I come across some work from a subscriber that I'd like to talk about within the structure of this site. Maybe they're doing something right that I'd like to share or maybe they're making an error that I'm seeing in a lot of other people's work that I'd like to address. I'll file these under "Random Workshops."

In the case of Brent, who graciously agreed to let me use him as an example, it was a little bit of both.

In this post, we take a comic from a subscriber and workshop it to try to improve the punchline and the overall presentation. A step-by-step look at the processes is provided. Log in to read the entire post.